Friday, April 5, 2019

My Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

She dreams of a love that only comes to her in her dreams
She sings for the worlds dream of eternal peace
She follows the path that is already predestined
She looks at all the beauty god has Created on earth
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Valentina Granados
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Chinedu Dike 13 June 2020

Witty philosophical reflection in heightened poetic diction. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Leena Amwaalwa 07 April 2019

Hi Valentina. I like your writing style, how the story ends when it was just beginning. The suspense prompts one to re-read the poem again. Well done.

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Valentina Granados 15 September 2019

thank you :)

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C F 05 April 2019

Very promising new poem, welcome to PoemHunter.com. Looking forward to more verses from you.

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