My love is not ideal, it has never been,
How can it be when I am only a human being?
I fight over little things; I make you go crazy,
I don't wake you up every morning because I am too lazy,
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Why can't I be the bride when you are the groom? My love is not ideal and is also selfish but it's all for you, And I'll keep fighting till the end because you love me too. loving and fighting for a relationship in the fear of losing. very well expressed in endearing terms..... poetic in tone........... thank u dear poetess.. tony
Fighting for love is really very thought provoking. This is an amazing poem brilliantly penned.10
sometimes you have to fight the world to be with your love.... thank you :)
Such love leads to the maturity of living. You need to be selfless when you are in love. Good one though.
everything you go through teaches you something :) thank you kumar
why always, love to prove itself, by paying the price. For loving you, I have a massive price to pay, ...
i have no idea why that happens... but i believe there is a price to pay for everything
A great poem on love and especially on marital love, I think. There are real images of love and life. I liked your poem much. Thanks for sharing.
The whimsical and temperamental nature of love are aptly captured in the poem. Very realistic rendition from the heart, focused and factual. Thanks for sharing Jasmeen and do remain enriched.