Sunday, December 3, 2017

My Love Comments

Rating: 4.6

My love is not ideal, it has never been,
How can it be when I am only a human being?
I fight over little things; I make you go crazy,
I don't wake you up every morning because I am too lazy,
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Jasmeen Kaur
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Chinedu Dike 09 March 2018

The whimsical and temperamental nature of love are aptly captured in the poem. Very realistic rendition from the heart, focused and factual. Thanks for sharing Jasmeen and do remain enriched.

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 December 2017

Why can't I be the bride when you are the groom? My love is not ideal and is also selfish but it's all for you, And I'll keep fighting till the end because you love me too. loving and fighting for a relationship in the fear of losing. very well expressed in endearing terms..... poetic in tone........... thank u dear poetess.. tony

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Jasmeen Kaur 14 January 2018

thank you very much Tony :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 December 2017

Fighting for love is really very thought provoking. This is an amazing poem brilliantly penned.10

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Jasmeen Kaur 04 December 2017

sometimes you have to fight the world to be with your love.... thank you :)

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 03 December 2017

Such love leads to the maturity of living. You need to be selfless when you are in love. Good one though.

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Jasmeen Kaur 04 December 2017

everything you go through teaches you something :) thank you kumar

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tenzy 03 December 2017

why always, love to prove itself, by paying the price. For loving you, I have a massive price to pay, ...

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Jasmeen Kaur 03 December 2017

i have no idea why that happens... but i believe there is a price to pay for everything

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Jazib Kamalvi 03 December 2017

A great poem on love and especially on marital love, I think. There are real images of love and life. I liked your poem much. Thanks for sharing.

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Jasmeen Kaur 03 December 2017

thank you very much for appreciating

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