Friday, May 12, 2023

My Love Comments

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My love
Her heart is like a forest
where all my thoughts abide
Resting in the shadows where lonely lovers used to hide
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Patrick Fealy
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Anil Kumar Panda 12 May 2023

Beautifully crafted. There is peace and love inside the forest. We all need. Nice share.

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Patrick Fealy 13 May 2023

I listened to Lightfoot who I want to Emulate to a song he wrote called the long river. Yesterday it dawned upon me that he hardly talks about love at all.. it's as if he's trying to console himself with the beauty of nature but it rang hollow and sad. That's brilliant. Less is more.

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