My Love Comments

The moon that falls on ocean still, without effort and the water quiet holds it without Nous, thou besieges and permeates inside The totality of my being, My inner wholeness.. ....

" I have delved a way in my heart, For thy soft feet, Stealthily wilt thou walk on this way to me, " Nice poem

sad no one read this LOVE POEM PG but after a comma do you need a caps? ? ? Try and edit this wonderful piece and re-post it with slight modification if you please...Many will re-read