Friday, January 15, 2016

My Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart beats for you since the age of two
Even then I knew that I would love you forever
But as we grew up the world told us we cannot be
So I buried the love I had for you at the age ten times one
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Tia Hospedales
COMMENTS
Jazib Kamalvi 22 March 2018

Write comment. A great start, Tianna. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Chinedu Dike 09 February 2018

An insightful depiction of a spiritual experience that is love which affects one profoundly, well articulated and nicely brought forth from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. Deep feelings nicely penned with insight. Thanks for sharing Tianna.

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Fabrizio Frosini 06 February 2016

Tianna.. got the invitation?

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Anita Khelawan 22 January 2016

such a beautiful poem.. I enjoyed how u mentioned the world wasn't having and how you brought it back in as if you didn't care what the world thinks... i understand that inflicted wounds sake to fill an emotional void but my best advice to you is keeping writing... cry out not too much cause that in itself is pain... you'll get through... rest assure that....What's yours will always know your face ~Anita.... thnx for sharing

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