Monday, December 28, 2015

My Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

The star that shines in the secrets sites of life,
As dark as night or the way to the ruthless grave -
Sewn within the soul of a bothered alien peasant man
Strolling the nights like knights heart-driven to save.
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Thabani Khumalo
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Chinedu Dike 07 September 2019

A beautiful and insightful love poem written with clarity of thought and mind. Thanks for sharing, Thabani.

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Prabir Gayen 02 January 2019

Very fine poem dear poet.....//////.....////////

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 November 2018

very strong in character, , , , , , , . O! how love is a material issue buried within the soul of an anguished man. Who am I to reproach for all this shame? Before I fade and wonder away- crucial expressions of reality as you observe. a powerful poem dear poet. tony

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 17 June 2018

Oh! Nicely written poem... She loves me not for she loves being paid, She sees me not for she sees his pay. O! How love is a material issue buried Within the soul of an anguished man!

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Adolf Baloyi 23 June 2017

Beautiful poem, loved it

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Sranisha Francis 14 May 2016

Beautiful and meaningfull...............

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Tman Kiry 12 January 2016

i should dim thee an angel of mine

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 December 2015

Life! Upon the mountain of love. Nice work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Thabani Khumalo 31 December 2015

thank you for your appreciation

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Gajanan Mishra 28 December 2015

love- strong in character, good one, thanks..

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Thabani Khumalo 31 December 2015

thank you for reading

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