Wednesday, November 2, 2005

My Love Comments

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When we met I knew you were the one,
I knew it had to be,
You held me tight and kissed my lips
I wanted you just for me.
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Dee Maguire
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Laura Cummings 02 November 2005

Both poems are good although the beginning of this one is verry similar to a part in the other 'You held me tight and kissed my lips'. But your work is good keep writting and i'll keep reading: -)

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