Saturday, September 24, 2011

My Love Comments

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O! My love
Your eyes are so beautiful,
that i have become their lover,
Please captivate me inside them my love,
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Vivek Haldar
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Vipins Puthooran 25 September 2011

It's a great poem... very beautifully penned all the lines...It's a nice poem to read again.

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Unwritten Soul 25 September 2011

The love has magical magnetic attraction..it call love to bound each other and hate to repel another...so believe me as the love you have in soul will attract the true love. This is law of love hahaha It's a joke..you have good writing skill keep it up, thanks for Inviting-Unwritten Soul

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Talal Athar 25 September 2011

deep words! ! ! loved the way u xpressed ur loved one! 'A scent of blossom prevails inside me', hah! awesome

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The 4am Poet Worm 25 September 2011

devoted words my friend... i think the lady who received it was most happy

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Jim Troy 25 September 2011

I think your love will be happy to read your very delightful and heart felt poem of love... It comes from your heart and surely will melt into hers Good poetry Jim Troy

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