Saturday, July 16, 2011

My Love Comments

Rating: 0.0

My love
you slept
Midnight i took my gun
I went out of tribe that hunt big generals for you
...
Read full text

maryam balangi
COMMENTS
Rafiq Sandeelvi 03 August 2011

I like Jim Troy's heartiest comments on your poems..No doubt you know the craft of short poem with deep meaning and aesthetic power....

0 0 Reply
Jim Troy 19 July 2011

My Love is such a great poem you have written Maryam..... You get better all the time Please keep writing.... You are very interesting to read..... You have such a marvelous style......... Respectfully, My Friend..... Jim

0 0 Reply
Jennifer .. 17 July 2011

This a very nice poem :) great title and storie within it too :) great rhyming

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success