My love
you slept
Midnight i took my gun
I went out of tribe that hunt big generals for you
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My Love is such a great poem you have written Maryam..... You get better all the time Please keep writing.... You are very interesting to read..... You have such a marvelous style......... Respectfully, My Friend..... Jim
This a very nice poem :) great title and storie within it too :) great rhyming
I like Jim Troy's heartiest comments on your poems..No doubt you know the craft of short poem with deep meaning and aesthetic power....