Thursday, March 7, 2013

My Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

I know we just broke up yesterday,
But I feel like a piece of my heart way taken away,
There was no other guy that would talk to me all night
And sing me a little song, my little lullaby
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Noelle Mott
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Tyler Herring 11 March 2013

This is my favorite poem deffinatly a 10! :)

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Roseann Shawiak 07 March 2013

I can feel your heart breaking in this poem while you want still want to retrieve your love again. Good expression of emotions.

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Gajanan Mishra 07 March 2013

Take me back my love. But love is always here. Omnipresent. good poem. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Noelle Mott

Noelle Mott

Tucson, Arizona
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