My Love Comments

‘That you`ve lit up my way with your world’ just 1 word amazing! ! 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

Such a beautiful use of words the heart can only open

A great love and a great poem as well! ! 10

I like the last two lines. You have translated it wonderfully.Thanks for sharing. best regards, jdh

dreams would again rise up bright and your 'star 'would again come down to your near skies...bit sad yet contented an emotion romantic fully described...thanks Emma...10

Yes you`ve vanished, but I had time to tell you, That you`ve lit up my way with your world great! ammmmmazing! 10+

Yes you`ve vanished, but I had time to tell you, That you`ve lit up my way with your world.......................... love true burns yet brilliant with awe eyes never meander being befuddled as heart knows very gleams of love clouds fails to hide the trudging path, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , love intense asd when flows like blue spumes over the hill sprucing up the skin of sky, wrought evocatively ingenious by imagery,10++, thanks for sharing

very powerful... its nice to see a positive poem.good work!

What a comment... a separate poem. What a pity we can`t vote the given comments, I`d do urs with 10+