I plunge into the warm waters of passion,
to war with the waves of emotion.
For I'm weak I had seek Perfection of
Truest love,
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wow.............randy passionate and filled with love...............lucky is ur angel.....
a bitter sweet tragedy wowwwwww MY HAND IS STILL WARM, MY SWEET ANGEL lovely words a tenner from me anjali
Bitter sweet Randy. But also strong, powerful, vivid, determined piece with imagery to die for! 'dragged across roughhewn rocks battered and bleeding' 'her beauty speaks to me as the sounds of 10,000 harps'. You are a suitor who will never take NO for an answer! excellent! 10 Karin Anderson
this is a kind of a very strong but sweet piece..i could not gauge this in a poetic manner coz i don't consider myself as poet..but for me, this is a very nice one considering the situation as the views of sadness..'live and don't let it die..love, and you shall live''..naizz
The power of love'e confessional is here portayed with much pathos Randy - - and it is filled with warm and tender feeling - - a 10 and more for your honesty in verse..... from Fay....10 + ++
a true love can always be a sweet even if it ends in tragedy..i like your poem..grace