When I am awake,
All I see is your face,
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all i can say is that.. ur poem is lovely and wonderful! ! as are u! ! bravo
'You never realize that you that make my world evolve, Commander of the sun and the moon, Conductor of the breeze and the wind, Keeper of the mother nature herself, And painter of the rainbow and the star'... how wonderfully artfully you express your devotional love, Lily! lovely write on intimate love feelings...10
beautiful poem Lily.straight from heart.loved it.