Monday, January 26, 2009

My Love Comments

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Dear You,

I just want to tell you,
I love you with all my heart.
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MoNique Jones
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Greenwolfe 1962 29 January 2009

I love two things about this. First, I like the repetition at the beginning of each verse. In fact, that line could easily be the title of this poem. You may want to use the current title for a poem later on. Second, there is genuine sincerety in the mind of this writer. There is no guile in this poem. Amen. Wonderful! GW62

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