Sunday, January 18, 2009

..... My Love Comments

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A suppressed past, blocked behind a sturdy wall
Hurt that left me far away, hidden from
Something that truly meant it all
How do you turn from a friend to a lover?
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Joshua Gallatin
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Evaughn Gray 21 January 2009

really good poem.. maybe you should take 'like' out of the last line in your poem it would make it better.. and if i may put in some advice, you could put more emotion into this it would make it better. :) ~Hazel G.E

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Joshua Gallatin

Joshua Gallatin

Fort Collins CO
Joshua Gallatin
Joshua Gallatin
Fort Collins CO
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