Monday, September 1, 2008

My Love Comments

Rating: 4.3

I'm sitting here wondering
What it is im waiting for
I'm thinking and im pondering
I really dont know anymore
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Kate Warner
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Jason Taylor 01 September 2008

I like this a real lot I new I was going to make a comment on it when I read the First three verses. The rhyming is really good two and the last verse I really liked. Keep it up a 9 from me well done.

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Tanya Stanford 01 September 2008

What a brilliant way of expressing your emotions. Well done. Love the rhyme to.

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Kate Warner

Kate Warner

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