My Love Comments

'No longer searching for love in all the wrong places, As we look into each other's faces' beautiful.......thanks for sharing 10

I've never had any of that, but you sure do make me want to. This was prose. I know that there are words in here that rhyme, but there are words that rhyme in virtually everything that is written. You structured it as poetry but in a piece written this well, it really doesn't matter what structure you use. I gave it a 10. Yes, I know, there is nothing that special here, why did you break your own rule. Well, I didn't. Because there is something special here. A prosaic picture of true love painted as only a true artist can portray it. With unimaginable beauty and transcendent qualities know only to God. GW62