Thursday, July 31, 2008

My Love Comments

Rating: 4.3

She walks down the path
A new life in front of her
It's a new journey
The signs are a little blurred from time to time
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Keith Foley 08 August 2008

Enjoyable read. Nicely put. I liked this one (also) read it more than once to let it soak in.

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silver phoenix 31 July 2008

You can see the time spent on this, great work! Please check some of mine too, perhaps youll like it.Rate it and comment if you can, constructive criticism is also welcome, if youre into small poems please read two. If youre more into complex poems check number 2 or 3. Thankyou, Kilian

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