Tuesday, August 2, 2011

My Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

I used to lie
Down at night
And close my eyes
And see my demons
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Dave Alan Walker
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Bella Forrest 14 March 2012

This is just beautiful. Its very peaceful. Thank you for sharing it with us!

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Lawrence H 13 January 2012

Dave, Very Good Love poem, short-lined, direct meaning and sweet message to your Love..I love your style in composing all your poems....

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Kaila George 17 October 2011

We all dream about Mr. or Mrs right dont we...we can dream cant we, smiles its a beautiful poem. Your lucky to have found the one for you...smiles enjoy life, share your love to all, dont be scared to show true love its rare you know. Sorry babbling, Ill read the rest of your poems...looks promising.

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Bartholomew A. B. Sarbah 09 October 2011

I love the way the first and second stanza blend together. You shown that love conquers everything. Thanks for making my day!

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Elena Sandu 10 September 2011

Sad poem, great write, thank you for share,10

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Dave Alan Walker

Dave Alan Walker

Pudsey, Leeds
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