Friday, August 12, 2016

My Love - 1 Comments

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My love centres
Around a few temporal things-
A blue saree,
A pair of pink lips
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Sriranji Aratisankar 30 August 2016

For Hundreds of births, From time immemorial across The endpoints of time and space. saying of a true lover... Thanks for sharing...10 for you...

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 August 2016

A smiling face! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bharati Nayak 29 August 2016

My love centres Around a few temporal things - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - A tug of dark hair hiding Thousands love letters within- - - - - -So simple, yet so beautiful ! Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 25 August 2016

My love centres Around a few temporal things- A blue saree, A pair of pink lips Two eyes, deep, hazel and beautiful, A tug of dark hair hiding Thousand love letters within. Beautiful poem shared.10 marks for it.

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Rajendra Rout 29 October 2018

I agree with you madam.it was a very beautiful poem

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Kelly Kurt 17 August 2016

A wonderful love poem, Subhas. Thank you

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Thanks Sir for your beautiful remarks on the poem.

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