Friday, January 2, 2009

My Love (1) Comments

Rating: 4.8

Dont worry my lady
i am stilling in my past usual
set every morning in that red cup
terning it upside go to another world and remember
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laila lili
sea
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3wwad 52 08 September 2009

nice work...you have away with expressing feelings.9

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Akram Awadat 29 June 2009

good work, i like it 10

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premji premji 27 January 2009

dear laila.... lovely lines...thanks.....

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Catrina Heart 25 January 2009

Beautiful poem with such a lovely last verse...10+

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Sebastine Humaemo 15 January 2009

lines done with love and affection.......pleasant all the way.....sebastine

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Ershad Mazumder 11 January 2009

I like this type of poem.

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Blue Eyes 08 January 2009

very nice poem keep sharing.

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Miral El Nahry 08 January 2009

It's really romantic, i like it! Keep up the good work

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Miriam Maia Padua 07 January 2009

romantic write....keep on writing laila....i like this piece...full of emotions....of longing....

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sara }i{ 02 January 2009

i like it so much wonderful words

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