Friday, October 17, 2014

My Lost Sapphire Comments

Rating: 5.0

As a young fledgling
I was always itching
To take off and fly
In the endless sky
...
Read full text

Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi
COMMENTS
Donnie Wolff 18 October 2014

Absolutely beautifully sad. You are no doubt gonna be on the top 500 easy. The way you put together your words sad or happy... It's beyond what I see normally. It's beyond the depth if some of the top 500. And I know you don't care about any of that, and that is what makes you so deserving of such an honor.

1 0 Reply
Piyush Dey 17 October 2014

it was a very touching and beautiful write filled so much emotions. i like it. Thanks for posting.

1 0 Reply
Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 17 October 2014

To take up fly in the endless sky to watch my dreams let me read your poem. Very beautiful and expressive one.

1 0 Reply
Geetha Jayakumar 17 October 2014

A Touching poem. Loved the way you kept the flow of poem and with beautiful rhymes. Painful words.... I sit dazed Watching my dreams Buried to the ground razed. Very true said, sometime our dreams never take a flight, they land on ground before taking its flight. Loved the way you presented it. Thanks for sharing with us.

1 0 Reply
Close
Error Success