I saw, looked and once i gazed
My heart beated once then it got raised,
He smiled and waved his friends gudbye
While my eyes rested upon the way he went by.
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Relationship broke, but love did not.Nice penning with full flow of emotions.I liked your poem dear Naima
Beautiful poem.Keep sharing Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
Beautiful poem Naima. Relationship has to pass through hills and oceans. Sometimes severity of relationship is tested especially during hard times..... You have captured all the emotions beautifully in this poem. I loved the way you presented it. Keep writing...
A very impressive description, of a lost love that appeared in a dreamy thinking. A nice poem.
Once i gazed! ! ! But, he was gone. Nice work with the muse of love and pain. Thanks for sharing.