Sunday, October 5, 2014

My Lost Love Comments

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I saw, looked and once i gazed
My heart beated once then it got raised,
He smiled and waved his friends gudbye
While my eyes rested upon the way he went by.
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Naima Ansari
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Edward Kofi Louis 24 December 2015

Once i gazed! ! ! But, he was gone. Nice work with the muse of love and pain. Thanks for sharing.

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Bharati Nayak 16 June 2015

Relationship broke, but love did not.Nice penning with full flow of emotions.I liked your poem dear Naima

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 20 December 2014

Beautiful poem.Keep sharing Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Geetha Jayakumar 13 October 2014

Beautiful poem Naima. Relationship has to pass through hills and oceans. Sometimes severity of relationship is tested especially during hard times..... You have captured all the emotions beautifully in this poem. I loved the way you presented it. Keep writing...

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Khalida Bano Ali 10 October 2014

A sweet emotional poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 05 October 2014

A very impressive description, of a lost love that appeared in a dreamy thinking. A nice poem.

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