Sunday, July 12, 2009

My Lost Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sitting here all alone
In this dark and cooled room
Wondering how you've been doing
while I'm here lying n bed and crying
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Afzal Shauq 13 July 2009

Wanting you so much my body is missing your touch Needing you back so badly Being you out of my life makes me go crazy very romantic way written poem... idea is good and heart feeling one.. liked it 10/10

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Marieta Maglas 12 July 2009

nice conceptual metaphor about pain: ''This tears would run dry one day Being in pain with all your memory'' nice written poem..10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 12 July 2009

Touchy.........lovely poem! ........10+

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