Sunday, March 18, 2018

My Lost Innocence Comments

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I lost my innocence
When I asked my mom
" Do really fairies exit?
Why doesn't Lord Jagannath have feet? "
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Namita Rani Panda
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Binayakumar Mohanty 23 October 2018

A poem with magical simplicity.A green horizon awaits somewhere.Thanks for sharing the poem.

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Purbesh Mahapatra 05 October 2018

Very nice poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 March 2018

I lost my innocence When I crossed adolescence And became a mature But with a longing to relive that innocent past. - - - - reliving the innocent past...... longing for that. at the end of the poem you are very factual and you become very spiritual.. thank you dear poetess. tony

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