Thursday, November 13, 2008

My Lost City Comments

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Here I can smell the tears of the clouds
Here the pitter-patter of rain is too loud
Here the wind blows from my lost city
Here the rainbow smiles like a baby
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Reihaneh Jalalian
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Ahmad Shiddiqi 13 November 2008

amazing! I like your style! keep writing! could you read and comment on my poems too, specially the new ones? Thank you.

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Joseph Poewhit 13 November 2008

Get that magical wonderment

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