Thursday, November 29, 2012

My Lost Asylum, Wisdom. Comments

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She was tender at heart,
In love with a story book
That contained butterflies,
Gardens, lawns, sheep,
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Tajudeen Shah
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You have well begun your journey on this forum Mr Tajudeen Shah. Meticulous handling of the apt English and balancing of thoughts intense will go a long way ahead, I hope. All the best poet

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