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O LORD OF WORDS PLEASE PG READ MY VERSE MARRIED TO SOLITUDE AND CONVERSE MAY UR LORD BLESS YOU FIRST

An inspirational write. Excellently scribed......10++++

The photographs you added are most beautiful and so cutest! They are the superfillers of your great heart, dear poet! God's Blessings in abundance for you and your beloved family.Amen.

with your Light inherent my being is the shadow of your Love and my self is Nothing..........this is truly loveliest said and told, but remains humble nothing, and your Light is inherent....your being is the shadow...... captivating and crystal clear, a prolific poignant poem, poet! I like your allegory! Marvelously worded. A 10+++

You are present in my day, dream and delirium, and my pain is poignant upon my awakening...................All stanzas so loveliest said, dream and delirium, aptly said and worded. Very emotively created.Words are in war here, but for the the super best result!

O my master! My mind's only hope, The great dance of emotion, And my pain with no verbage, the unbearable tremor in every cell of my being, I live as if I am nothing..........................a loyal servant of the master, wonderful! Humble words, amazing!

Pain is common and seems eternal in this room, You reign and dance like absolute nothingness when I feel my mind is absent........................Imaginably said and told. Wonderful poem! Marvelously worded.

My Lord O My master! The Lord of the world, You live as absolute Joy in my heart, and my mind is full of your thoughts, Your love in my heart is like a veil, like a divine covering.......................mesmerizing poem, a thought provoking one. Full of excellence!