My Longing For God Comments

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A very meditative comtemplative poem that brings personal complancency. Very touching, Greetings Paul

Oh! very good. I sat and enjoyed this vision in the stillness of the night.

Sublime poem. I liked it.10

Beautiful use of the simile of glowwarm in the stillness of the night.... serene and peaceful piece of art. many thanks.

Very nice imagery of an awesome visitation.

this one I Like. please write more. aim for Long Form.

great joy! I'm happy for the Grace you recieved from God!

These word are very good. I sat and enjoyed this vision in the stillness of the night.

This poem describes a very personal encounter with God; it is really one-on-one I noticed that the actual presence of God occurs between lines 2 and 3, and this is a blank space filled with a spiritual presence, nothing material. You agree with many mystics who say the experience is beyond words, but the occasion is not beyond words and your poem makes it believable.

Suddenly I had the feeling that the one who came to give me love left me suddenly like a glow worm which came to me in the night and left. the appearance of God and the disappearance of God is well expressed. this seems to be a mystical experience. thank you dear Poetess.