Tuesday, July 14, 2020

My Lonely Room Comments

Rating: 5.0

So nice to see you sweetheart once again,
Let me recollect my forgotten old pains,
Preen it, preen it and make it a fountain,
Come on dear clouds, come on with the rains.
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Mahtab Bangalee 14 July 2020

Lonely room with the alone heart far aside craving for the love, for the luminous love yearning insanely to possess the soul of love with the blooming flower through the aromatic breeze by the wings of birds couple.........

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 July 2020

Another excellent and wonderful write. Full of images and great imagination. Makes the heart flutter and mind tingle Beautifully crafted. Loved reading it

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