Monday, February 9, 2015

My Lonely Heart Comments

Rating: 4.5

The time is turning dawn,
And the day still groan.
Nobody knows my life is ruin
I almost lost everything.
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Mary Joy Ardimer
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Suburban Lovechild 10 February 2015

You can definitely feel the emotion come right off the page. The angst, the confusion, the why-me.

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Chinedu Dike 10 February 2015

The secret of surviving tribulations is in taking everything in stride, patience, and faith. FAITH KEEPS THOSE THAT KEEP THE FAITH - Mother Teresa. It's a lovely poem, well articulated and nicely penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Mary Joy Ardimer

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