Thursday, May 8, 2014

My Little Yellow Bird. Comments

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My lovely little yellow bird,
So soft and cute
Lost in a stormy night,
I cannot find you,
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Amitava Sur
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Roseann Shawiak 06 June 2014

Wandering through a storm in your mind, looking for your lost love, who once filled your life with beauty and joy. Searching everywhere for your love, being disappointed at not finding her, falling into a deep loneliness while waiting for her return. Your life now foreign even to itself. You have touched my heart, Amitava, your sadness fills my heart with your pain - let it console your being. RoseAnn

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Valsa George 06 June 2014

Your lovely yellow bird must be sheltered in loving hands.... When the due time comes, once and for ever you'll be united with her.... Let this thought console you! Poignant write!

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 08 May 2014

Nice write..liked the flow of it very much

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