Tuesday, September 26, 2006

My Little Scherzo N. Short Work, Often Rythmic, Usually Happy Comments

Rating: 5.0

I love you, sotto voce, she whispers my name.
I whisper, tremolo, I love you the same.
Having not heard this concerto for too many years
The depth of the music has brought me to tears.
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Bruce Schwab
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Practicing Poetess 30 March 2017

Ah, so the bard is also a musical madrigal! This is lovely, though only those knowledgeable in music will truly appreciate it. Excellent job!

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Prasanna Kumari 04 October 2006

although i dont understand it fully i can feel the rhythm of music flowing with the rhythm of love.beautiful poem esp.with your rhyme

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Bruce Schwab

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