Saturday, July 7, 2007

My Little Red Car (Fun Poem 30) Comments

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I have a little red car,
that fits five quite comfortably,
but members of my family
when shopping think I drive a lorry.
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David Harris
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Tsira Goge 01 June 2008

You beautifully write the St. Father but I ask with a smile: and what mercy have made these feet secretly? Sincerely Tsira

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Risha : Ahmed 08 July 2007

Really a funny poem. What a fun. I can imagine you sitting on sunroof and driving the car. HAHAHA! ! !

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DAVID>>>And FUN, indeed are each, and one of your Fun Poems...as well as Frill Filling, and Fantastic Fanfare Full....This one brought to mind my very 1st car...1979 Buick Regal...candy-apple red...white ladau 1/2 roof, and ivory interior. Though it wasn't small at'all...your poem still made me think about it & smile... Thanks for finding my lost recall! lol! Great Penning, as always, good buddie! FjR

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Sometimes we gals forget when we have shopping in the car that 'tis quite important to have a driver... :) cute D. t x

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 07 July 2007

How does the the song go now, i like driving in my car it`s not quite a jaguar...10

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