My Little One Comments

this brings me a smile...it is full of love and encouragement

Line 7 should be 'hold me as a sword'...or is this what you wanted to say Good write to your child...10s

nice poem, lovely to read

When you're at your rainbows end or at the middle of black and white whatever happens mind to look back and you will see my wave of good luck! nicely writtn poem

A good bondage has been shown with the little one. May the child live long.

I love this poem. It do cheer me up. And make me feel that I'm no alone. I like the way you talk to your reader on this poem. It help those who are lonely and alone. I hope you are real and stay with me. I love the poem. Such a masterpiece! 10!

So go on my dear little one afraid not because you are not alone from the start as your journeys begun I said I'm with you my little one. an good poem written in a rich way about life and its way to spend.. its really a good poem, idea in sound, the way you wrote is impressive enough..well done...10/10

Strengthening support for achieving the goals of life. In them consider not single. Good write. Shared and enjoyed.10+