Sunday, April 5, 2009

My Little Ghost Boy Comments

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I saw you little boy,
Dont be afraid,
I want to help you.
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Rosalita Fern
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I've seen ghosts, Angels, spirits and my pets after they passed away.Our house is haunted by a monk's ghost.I see them completely not just as an orb or fleeting cloud of light.There must be a reason for the child's spirit to stay in limbo-is he dressed in modern clothing or clothing from another era? Good poem.a ten from me....keep writing-you are a much better writer than you give yourself in your auto-biography credit for.

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Anita Wisniewska 07 April 2009

a lovely thought, for the poor ill and departed ones. i'll keep this one.

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Teresa Dearing 05 April 2009

Nicely done, I to once lived in a house where things went bump in the night and shadows fell in broad daylight. T

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