Thursday, October 8, 2015

My Little Friends, Birds! ! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Before they come with their case,
please fly away far with ease,
it is a matter of days, chirping birds,
please fly away far with ease.
...
Read full text

Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
COMMENTS
Ratnakar Mandlik 11 October 2015

Razing of the nature has become a hobby for the so called modern people who in their pursuit of wealth and more wealth forget their sacred duty of preserving bountiful nature and ecological balance. This poem must have been penned after experiencing lot of pain by the said developments. The appeal made to birds to fly on their own before onslaught of the tormentors is superb. Regards.10.

0 0 Reply
Kumarmani Mahakul 08 October 2015

Birds, animal, trees, forest or nature are our main properties. These oughtn't be destroyed. A heart touching depiction you have made in this poem so nicely and wisely. It is not only an intensive poem but also a didactic poem. Many thanks.....10

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success