Friday, July 8, 2011

My Little Brother Comments

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My little brother has tickly toes,
A tickly tummy and a tickly nose.

My little brother has lots of green snot,
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Daniel P Martin
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Adeline Foster 18 October 2011

This is expert. Wonderful form, thoughts and structure. It is so much fun writing for children. Try mine - I Worry Too - but don't stop there. Adeline

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Efran Menny 01 September 2011

I liked this poem, a great tribute to your little brother

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Shadow Girl 21 August 2011

Sweet! Has a Spike Milligan kinda ring about it!

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