Thursday, August 6, 2009

My Little Brother Comments

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I remember the day
He was born.
It was in the morn
That he came on a sojourn
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Ravi Panamanna
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Bharati Nayak 15 May 2015

The poem so poignant.brings tears to eyes- - Thus his visit to this mortal world Lasted but a few hours He tasted the breast milk To know the earthly love And then returned to his heavenly abode. But the purposes of life is well captured in the beautiful lines of last stanza- - Life is like that Every soul has a pre-destined ground From the shores of my little world I am reflecting on the purposes of life.

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Catrina Heart 06 August 2009

A poignant poetic narration...sad to hear that your brother an angel passed away so soon to return to his eternal Father....LIFE IS LIKE THAT...true and we have to bear it sometimes! Thanks for this well written poem...10/10

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HaZeM PaKKaR 06 August 2009

i quote: '' life is like yhat ''.. it's really charming & fascinating.. but sometimes so painful.. You've truly expressed your talent, Using very well chosen words.. Please, let me know about your new piece!

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Ravi Panamanna

Ravi Panamanna

Ottapalam- Kerala State- India
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