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A lighthouse stands at Garden Key
Alone, unmoving beside the sea
Comfort the weary, help to the lost
Saving the lives of the tempest tossed
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Excellent writing Georgiana 10+ Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken
A poem that shows the yearning for spiritual connection with God. It beseech God's guidance in ones life. Beautifully penned but the last line seemed to go out of the flow. The words hang at the end of the stanza.
I added an extra syllable to the last line, and think it flows better
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7/26/2025 11:59:19 PM # 1.0.0
A nice poetic imagination, Georgiana. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lus. Thanks