Thursday, May 12, 2011

My Lighthouse Comments

Rating: 4.5

I feel kinda adrift when I am not with you
Like a ship waiting to be back in port
The days like contrary tides
seem to conspire against me
...
Read full text

Patti Wilburn Haney
COMMENTS
Arwa Bharmal 12 May 2011

I like the use of imagery.. it works well -

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success