Sunday, December 7, 2014

My Light Of Hope Comments

Rating: 4.5

I was a lonely wanderer
In the darkness of the night
The black clouds stretched across the sky
They hid the moon so bright.
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reshma joy
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Chinedu Dike 02 November 2015

Lovely narrative piece of poetry nicely penned with conviction. A good depiction of a loving father's care and protection well articulated with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Joy. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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