Tuesday, July 14, 2009

My Light! Comments

Rating: 5.0

I dreamt of you
Your sweet lips I tasted,
Your warm body I carassed
Your smooth legs I touched
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alexander Peralta
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Dylan Oppedahl 04 November 2009

lovely poem. Im a sucker for a romantic poem

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Indira Renganathan 06 October 2009

Love of a school boy lovely written

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Ency Bearis 14 July 2009

a passionate write...a lucky soul mate with this compassionate care of yours...nice write...a good simile.....10

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