Monday, April 23, 2007

My Life - Yours Too Comments

Rating: 5.0

Me you call Nature’s wonder
When a cascade or a spring slender
Me as a mighty ocean you can see
As morning dew, I can always be.
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Sarda Mohan
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Sandra Fowler 24 April 2007

This poem delivers a very profound message. Excellent work, Sarda. Warm regards, Sandra

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Rajaram Ramachandran 24 April 2007

Summing up, I find the last line, 'But forget not, without me, never can you be' is a crown on the poem, despite all differences.

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Marvin Brato 23 April 2007

This write is very inspiring, reminding us of the beauty of mother nature of which we live in. Thus, in gratitude must not destroy its splendor and bounty.10 for it.

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