My Life Without You. Comments
Perfect moments are never long enough, and perfect dreams are always cut in half.
I stand alone were we once stood two,
in the place where i first saw you.
We played for the world and acted each a part,
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ohhh, I really really like this...I love the first line...pure magic...nice work
Your melancholy words write straight from the heart. It's a good idea to air emotions through poetry. Great work! Karin Anderson
It is finished-without breath then perhaps...dont make it disappear again! ! ! ! ! !
Oh I feel this! Agonising... well done Peya - your words are full of the emotions that bring this poem to life...10/10
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7/18/2025 12:56:37 PM # 1.0.0
I like Viola love the first line. This is so heartfelt and longing, and it is sad humans have to go through the emotions of lost love. Your writing is beautiful..... Karin Anderson 10/10