My Life Tastes A Bitter Sweet Comments

Good poem, Alex! I also feel the dropp of bitter sweet in my life...

=] Good job and with just a little more proof reading you could be sooo good =D

so understanding feels like you are in my head...

nice write, keep it coming

Nice phrasing.....into verse unique.......title attractive!

I love the way your words touch my heart. Great piece. xx Mary

I like the way you eased into this from your first line...some really nice phrasing...keep on writing...Coach