Friday, August 29, 2008

My Life So Far Comments

Rating: 4.5

If you think that I will perish
With nothing more than tears
If you think that I only hope
Since I hide within my fears
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Justin Fitzpatrick
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Bob Bob 20 January 2009

aww bless that realy nice with a exprience that alot of people well this is a good way to let out ur feelings

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Susan Jarvis 29 August 2008

This puts me in mind of Maya Angelou's 'Still I Rise'. An poignantly penned, heartfelt poem. S :)

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Hades Pandemonium 29 August 2008

A wonderfully written poem. Good use of metaphors: -)

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