Monday, January 11, 2016

My Life Said Sorry A Little Late! ! Comments

Rating: 5.0

The show was going flawless
The dance was on the beat
You held me just so perfectly
Our steps would always meet
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Khushbeen Kaur
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Jazib Kamalvi 26 December 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Khushbeen. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 January 2016

After many painful days When you finally came When you explained the reason And took all the blame I am standing in the middle Baffled in the riddle.. rhythmic steps. i could feel your rhythmic steps in this poem and the sorrow and feeling of blame. i am late. the feeling of missing. in between. so you have portrayed very well your feelings and emotions. thank you. tony

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Khushbeen Kaur 14 January 2016

This is truly encouraging.. Thanks a lot everyone :)

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Abhilasha Bhatt 11 January 2016

Life always play its part nd we have to play our part people come and go in life....its on us how to react on and accept every change..A good poem...loved it...thanx for sharing :)

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Aarzoo Mehek 11 January 2016

Life never stops to anyone, embrace the truth and keep dancing to the tune of life. One touchy poem Khushbeen. It touches ones heart...10 for this sensitive poem

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