Saturday, November 17, 2018

My Life's Literature Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Now I am left alone in the desert of your love,
All the oceans are screaming: my sympathy.
Nightingale has all the locution for my love,
I am falling down like water devolves,
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Shafee Pitafi
sympathy Oceans Seasons
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Unnikrishnan E S 03 August 2021

I am talking about another life: the real life, Where no shadow of you can see me, "" wonderful poem. Full score.

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Meer Mansoor 20 November 2018

Good effort and wonderful attempt..

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Shafee Pitafi 23 November 2018

Thanks dear

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Khalil Ur Rehman Shami 18 November 2018

gorgeous Shafi, may you touch the edges, so be it.

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Shafee Pitafi 23 November 2018

thank you so much

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Aamir 18 November 2018

Indeed a great wisdom and wit of the writer is shown in each verse.

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Shafee Pitafi 23 November 2018

Thanks a lot for you love.

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Shafee Pitafi

Shafee Pitafi

Larkana, Sindh, Pakistan
Shafee Pitafi
Shafee Pitafi
Larkana, Sindh, Pakistan
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