Wednesday, October 19, 2005

My Life's Cold Sea Comments

Rating: 4.5

As I look up to the stars
That drift on a life's cold sea
One thing that is certain
They never shone for me
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Steffi Webster
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Ben Paynter 18 January 2006

took an invisible feeling and made it a photograph to admire, it seems you have gapped the space between heart and pen, beautiful words, one thing that is certain, your words they shine for me. ben

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Uriah Hamilton 19 October 2005

lonliness is a persistent river flowing.

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Cara Green 19 October 2005

good poem, deep and heart felt

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Steffi Webster

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